Yes, it’s that time of the week again. SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY!
This time I’ve selected a bit of my current wip No Going Back
Enjoy!
“Oh dear Lord.” She hit the side of the flashlight with her palm and aimed it into the hole. There was a brief resurgence of white light.
Brief enough to see the ghostly white face and dark eyes staring back at her from within the depths of the tunnel.
She screamed, and ice-cold fear dumped over her. The flashlight dropped out of her hand and went twirling until it faded to black.
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Cerian Hebert 
Now I’m worried for her. Great six.
Thanks Heather. I’m glad you stopped in. 🙂
Wow, that’s scary! Great six!
Thanks so much, Paula! I succeeded then. 🙂
Very scary and tense. Love the “ice-cold fear dumped over her.” Great six!
I’m glad it did what it was supposed to do. 🙂 Glad you stepped by, Kate.
Great snippet Ceri….hope you follow it up next week with where you left off…can’t wait to see what happens!
I could do that, Christine. Thanks for stopping in!
Yikes, what is it? Scary 6!
I’ll have to post the next 6 next week. I’m glad you stopped in.
Oh yikes!
LOL Glad you liked it. 🙂
Oooh, I LOVE this! It left me breathless!
Thanks so much, Sarah!
Darn! I missed this part! I need to catch up on some crits for sure, Ceri. 🙂
LOL It’s okay Calisa. If you want to read it just let me know. 🙂
Enjoyed your six. Want to know more about what’s in the hole.
Thanks Cara. I think I’m going to post more from this wip next week. 🙂
Great six. Your words sent chills up my spine.
😀 Thanks Jo-Ann! I’m glad I succeeded!
Yikes! That’s a frightening situation! I can’t wait to find out what happens next! 🙂
I’m going to have to post the next sentences next week. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!
Horizontal or vertical hole? and did she drop the flashlight in it?
That is evident with the rest of the scene. 🙂 Thanks for stopping in!
That is scary. I think they both were frightened. Really effective scene, Ceri.
Hey Ryan, great to see you this week. Thanks so much!
I wasn’t expecting a face–or her losing her flashlight. I better come back next week to see what happens. 🙂
I’ll make sure I post something else from this wip. 🙂 Thanks for stopping in!
Ooo, very atmospheric!
Thanks for stopping in. I’m getting to love writing paranormals!