HAPPY SUNDAY! I really love doing Six Sentence Sunday. Love reading other sentences and love hearing feedback on what I post. I appreciate it!
Today I’m going to stick with the wip I posted from last week, the fantasy I want to finish.
If I told them no they would have become suspicious. They would want to know why. They would dig and dig until they discovered I was not who they thought I was.
I squeezed my eyes shut and tried to purge the nightmarish vision from my head, but all I could see was Hamish, bound to the tree, the two monstrous dogs going at him. And of course my arm around the tall woman, my knife pressed into her throat.
Would I pull the blade across her flesh?
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22 thoughts on “SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY-04/15/12”
WOW. Awesome writing. You elicit so much feeling in six sentence! Amazing.
Thanks Jo-Ann! I appreciate it! Thanks for coming by. 😀
You’ve definitely conveyed a nightmarish vision to me! Being chained to a tree with dogs “going at” him. shudder. Well done!
Thanks Claire! glad you stopped in.
Sadly, this isn’t one I’ve sent to the group. It’s not even close to being finished. Maybe I’ll have to work on it. Thanks Calisa!
This excerpt is going to give me nightmares! Is it a dream or really happening. Don’t pull a Don Draper on us! Lol.
Thanks! I think I’ll have to work on this story more. 😀
Yikes. What a sinister six!
LOL Thanks Lorraine. That’s what I was aiming for. 😀
sinister 6, very intriguing!
Thank you, Angela. 😀
Oh my! Is this in the chapters I still owe you? Need to go crit those soon, now that tornadoes are done for a few days
I’m eager to know what she’s gonna do with that knife at the woman’s throat. Tense six, Gayle. Nice!
Poor girl. Killing just isn’t her style. But what would she do for her friends… Thanks for stopping in, Ryan.
Oops! I mean Ceri! 😉
Wow! This six really grabs me. That last sentence is a killer!
Thanks Sarah! I’m glad I accomplished what I wanted to. Thanks for coming by.
Real nightmare quality.
LOL That’s exactly what I was looking for. Thanks Sueann!
Very powerful. Can’t wait to read this one.