I thought I’d take a break from the story I’ve been sharing lately. Instead I’m posting the first six sentences from my upcoming release The Better Man, which will be coming out in May from Still Moments Publishing
“…I hope someday you’ll forgive me.”
The tears rolling off Lorelei’s cheek fell onto the single sheet of paper, turning the signature into a splotch of blue ink. She didn’t have to see the frigging signature anyway. This was the second time she’d read the damned letter. The bastard! The rotten, lousy, son of a bitch bastard!
13 thoughts on “SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY! April 22, 2012”
I love the show of emotion in your six, Ceri. I wish you much success with The Better Man.
Thanks so much, Sandra. I’m glad you stopped in.
Wow, Strong writing! Lots of raw emotion. Great sentences!
Thanks Nancy! 😀
Uh oh! Seems like he’s in big trouble. Great six!
LOL Trouble and in trouble! 😀
This really is a wonderful story, Ceri. Love this six! Very pain-filled emotion.
Thanks Calisa. Can’t wait for it to be released next month!
I hope this is the last cry she sheds for this man. Intense six!
Thanks! 😀 Glad you stopped in.
Sounds to me like he’s not worth crying over.
LOL You better believe it! Thanks for coming over, Sueann.
Awesome description, Ceri. You really bring out her raw emotion in this scene.