HAPPY FATHER’S DAY to all the dads out there!
Well, I’ll be spending my morning at Logan Airport in Boston and a bus. No, not going anywhere, just dropping off my stepdaughter so she can spend her summer vacation is S.C. the lucky kid.
Anyway, I’ve decided to post the first six sentences from a manuscript that’s currently going through the crit stage, on its way *fingers crossed* to publication. The story is called Going Going Gone.
Enjoy!
Excellent buildup in this excerpt. Really makes me want to know more, about who she used to be and how she is now – great six!
Great six!!! I felt it, and am definitely curious to know “who she used to be”. Very intriguing, and definitely has me wanting to know more!
I’m enjoying this one Ceri. 🙂 Have a safe trip home from Boston.
Thanks so much, Calisa. 🙂
Thanks Calisa. It was a loooooong day/night!
Sounds like a high school reunion–but why her younger sister?
Nope, not a high school reunion. :)She’s at an auction being held at her old high school gymnasium. Thanks for coming by. 🙂